Sory for bad english.
Please read it and tell me your opinion!
My new story idea and characters description.
I know it is not something special, but still... Do you like it?
Story:
Chains of the past®
After the Spartans conquered Achaeans, they are forced to split into two groups. Those who had rebelled against the new government have been captured, condemned to slavery in houses of Spartans, while those who have not resisted maintained freedom. Damen has finished among those trapped, forced to work as a slave. He was sold to one of the most influential Spartans, and after his death on the battlefield remains to work with his wife, remains equally difficult tasks. He's trying very hard to forget what he was once, as well as his love waiting for him in the village of Acheans is free, but it's just too hard. As if that is not enough, the Spartans regularly organize public whippings and beatings to remind them that they are only slaves here, and in those days a spark of desire for freedom becomes a fire at Damen. Between two fires - one that wants to keep him alive, even as a slave, and those who want to rebel and tries to escape, as an additional problem arises arrival of the master's daughter who immediately gets under his skin. This encourages the desire to stay, but the fire of rebellion still rounds in it. What will he choose? Is it worth the fight at all? And what if his actions start something stronger, something that can not be stopped?
Characters:
Damen, Achaean, slave. Brown hair and green eyes. His hair was longer, but they cut it when he bacame slave.
Kalypso, master's daughter. Blonde hair and blue eyes. Long, curly hair. Her skin is pale.
(No-picture-jet)
Rhea, his old love. Reddish/brown hair and brown eyes.
Other OCs from story; Darius (master), Nephele (master's wife), Dorryen (Damen's best friend), Zoe (Dorryen's sister)...
Copyrights
Copyright © 2013, MaryPope (Andrea T.)
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PS: If you like it, I can send you few more chapters, but only on croatian. ^^'
Love,
MaryPope.